Flash Fiction: A story in under 250 words

4 thoughts on “Flash Fiction: A story in under 250 words”

    1. Yeah, I was trying to have it feel like a slow motion moment that all took place within a muzzle flash. This is the first time I’ve experimented with flash fiction. Thank you for the feedback, I am glad you liked it.

      I tend to bog my work down with excessive details. I try to make it ring true. I guess it didn’t work out he way I wanted to here. Oh well, live and learn, it will only prove to make my future works better :).

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